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步韵和文友燕归来七律莫愁秋的回味(两组)

作者:刘春庆,阅读 191 次,评论 1 条,送花 4 朵,投稿:2018/11/6 6:15:28

【编者按】:一组步韵唱和佳构,诗语凝练,手法娴熟,转合有致,意境清幽。欣赏问好。

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