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  • 母亲越来越老了(外一首)

              作者 /   爱心妈妈

    【编者按】第一首诗歌结构严谨,语意深刻。多角度来体现母亲的老,实际上是在赞美母亲的勤劳,简朴与慈祥。一位和蔼可亲的母亲形象跃然纸上。第二首诗歌由一声声布谷鸟在夜里的鸣叫声展开思路,借古论今议论抒情。

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